tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555136190302766593.post2967723030658497433..comments2017-10-15T14:11:49.786+02:00Comments on Of Orcs and Men: Kruzz VIKai Delmashttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14913623803715499069noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555136190302766593.post-71067506092814844592017-03-29T11:45:02.337+02:002017-03-29T11:45:02.337+02:00You know, I think that's one of the reasons it...You know, I think that's one of the reasons it took so long to write this. It's very similar to the Small John chapter where he's training. There's nothing really there to get a hold of.<br /><br />I tried to get more into Kruzz's head and show his struggle with his situation, but I also wanted him to improve and move forward.<br /><br />In total, maybe this chapter wasn't necessary, but I wanted to get back to him and not let him be forgotten when it comes to POVs. ;)Kai Delmashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14913623803715499069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5555136190302766593.post-22615898544744740202017-03-28T19:58:34.674+02:002017-03-28T19:58:34.674+02:00It might be the long absence, I'm not sure, bu...It might be the long absence, I'm not sure, but this doesn't grab me. I read it twice, but it feels very traditional, with no particular plot progress or character development. Too water-tready for my taste... This better pay off later on ;)Tomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11749647252820873758noreply@blogger.com