Zirayus

Tuesday, March 26, 2019

Feedback Wanted!

For any newcomers, here are the 47 chapters I have so far, in the correct order. You'll also find the same list here. You can jump to the next or previous chapter at the bottom of every post for your convenience.

I'm open to any and all types of criticism, lay it on me. I wrote this several years ago and I know there is much room for improvement, but I'd like feedback to know what works and what doesn't so that I can focus on that when I work on a new version of this story.

1. Bron
2. Grim 
3. Damien
4. Kruzz
5. Big John
6. Mexta
7. Serah
8. Kruzz II
9. Small John
10. Grim II
11. Bron II
12. Mexta II
13. Damien II
14. Dax
15. Serah II
16. Kruzz III
17. Kruzz IV
18. Small John II
19. Big John II
20. Zir
21. Bron III
22. Grim III
23. Small John III
24. Mexta III
25. Damien III
26. Dax II
27. Serah III
28. Zir II
29. Rud
30. Kruzz V
31. Small John IV
32. Skard
33. Bron IV
34. Grim IV
35. Rud II
36. Mexta IV
37. Big John III
38. Skard II
39. Damien IV
40. Zir III
41. Serah IV
42. Dax III
43. Bron V
44. Kruzz VI
45. Rud III
46. Grim V
47. Big John IV

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